In a dark creek,guarded from all sight
Live they,the creatures of the night,
A life free from harrows,
But can it ever be free of strife.
Haggards born unto a world so dark,
They smile not,fearing forever pain
Lips mocking,breaking into an occasional smirk
Mirth held in such disdain
A gentle stir,strangers pass by
Silhouetted by the ever growing darkness
Theres no reason to fear,nor to smile
Facing each day with an unchanged face
no one sings them lullabies
sleep be an eternal Friend,come hither,embrace
of forgotten dreams,visions long tarried
no painted veil to grace...
and yet they live,for live they must
come here they not to die
hoping for a new morning every day
hope rides out on every sigh..
11 comments:
You wrote this?... good job man... keep it coming...
& yeah, love the theme.
woh pretty good....
no!! more than better poetry
the 2 starting lines rockkkkkkkkkkkk
Good work, but would have liked to see it better punctuated, just a suggestion! :)
great job
ur template is very nice
Hope is necessary in everything we do. It keeps us going.
Nice poem. :)
Paanu u r a LEGEND. Awesome buddy!!!
thanks jua...so will u be there at spring fest?????we might just as well be staging a play...
good one.
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Hey nice job dude!
I love poetry
Just a suggestion- look 4 proper punctuaion and your lines would seem to be all the more beautiful
Regards,
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Nice poem Dude...
KEEP PENNING
:)
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