Marvelled she long at the unmoving mass
Relentlessly steady and resolutely free
Even as it changed through the varied seasons
Through arderous time,through day and night,
Decked in shades of the brightest blue,black and white.
Under the unmoving blue she strolled
The tunes harmony reaching a crescendo
Her black curls rippled down in a bristling platter of cascading sheets
And the monsoons adorned her in a vial of glistening drops
As they dripped delightfully on the perched tamarisks around her
Unaware of a greater world outside
She gazed at the bright blue sky
Her age old friend fading into the distance afar.
And then one day he came,riding on his horse pitch black
The resonating wedding bells sounded hollow today
Even as they danced in mirthful joy
And as the sun rose again,they took her away.
Carelessness of everyday replaced by wrested chores
Saw she not the blue azure anymore
Imprisoned by the fetters of the urban life
Danced she no more as the monsoons roared.
And then one day she broke free
Running up those winding fleet in tepid steps,
Limbered up into the open in palpitating beats,
As the red saree flapped behind in gyrating grates
And Anuva searched for familiarity in the unending blue
For traces of recognition in her childhood friend,
Until she felt numb and wounded,a sour rancour,
As the black chimney belched out in thick rings.
Silhouetted in that smog of distasteful grey,
Robbed of its blue splendour,childhood friend was no more.
18 comments:
Nice blog and great posts!
good job
great work
keep it coming
This blog reminds me of school time poems...which i would find difficult to understnd :D guess this was as similar to tht
Anywys over all gud one :)
@komathi.....the poem portrays the changes effected by industrialisation and urbanisation....and how a little girl from village who used to be so much in love with the skies during childhood is married into an urban family and finds the sky in the city so different to what she had witnessed in her childhood days....hope dat helps..
Yea Abhi..
got it.... but see, the effect was somethng of school time poems is wht i meant :)
now.....was it a good school tm poem....or a bad one....i mean......i m not asking it from the perspective of ho much marks it fetched u....
Dont doubt.. its a gud one... bt be sure, tht i wud fetch a low marks only ;)
Too Good...
great post
TFS!
Nice read.
nice post
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nice work man
legitimately excellent
loved it to the core, i thnk i became a bit nostalgic too..
Gud one dude...keep going...
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neatly crafted... may b u sud nw look 4 simplicity 2 mk dem digestible by blunter minds like me... kp penning...
Another gud one from You.......Keep goin...
an insightful piece of prose, i really liked it since i found it smewat different frm wat we read nowadays
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